Some believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

this

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technologically advanced world we have several

option

Suggestion

options

to choose for any sorts of activity. By the grace of globalization and

technology we

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technology, we

are getting numerous number of

opportunity

Suggestion

opportunities

to facilitate our lifestyle. Overwhelming of choices would be elucidated and my position would be clarified on the subsequent part. To commence, it is needless to say that in every kind of activity we have different options to crack it.

First

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of all, our food choice

is varies

Suggestion

has varied

so much rather than in

past

Suggestion

the past

, when we can choose local food or foreign food and other thing is, we can cook dishes at home or we can just order online.

Moreover

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, we can decide our career in different ways like work in a corporation or organisation by appearing physically

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in inverse, we can choose a job which we can operate from our home and any other places. Meanwhile, we can shop anything from our residence through internet or we may decide to go market physically.

In addition

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, there is enormous resources of entertainment from which we can make our preferences.

For instance

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, when I was

child

Suggestion

a child

there was only a

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

affiliated TV channel to watch easily while in

this

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era there

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era, there

huge number

Suggestion

a huge number

of TV channel to enjoy.

Therefore

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, we have more than needed opportunity to make our choices from

colossal amount

Suggestion

the colossal amount

of options.

However

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, it is not deniable that there are still

copious number

Suggestion

a copious number

of areas which are far more

from

Suggestion

about

these facilities. Thence, not all of

inhabitants

Suggestion

the inhabitants

this

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globe has various options to choose. What's more, many of them devoted yo their pristine beliefs. To illustrate, according research, there are 45% of people wanting of pure water and 35% of people living o life which is full of starvation. To cut the story short, I agree the statement slightly; there is still

lifes

a characteristic state or mode of living

life

required human right in fundamental level. There should be a balanced distribution of facilities.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

322 words

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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