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memorization of information by frequent speaking mainly known rote learning

#memorization #information #rote
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In
this
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 modern era,
rote
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 learning is a part and parcel of our life which has been used by schools
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collages
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refers to the speaker or writer
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 believe that the drawbacks of
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this outskirts
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these outskirts
 to demerits. To embark with,
rote
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 learning brings students have numerous benefits.
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first
preceding all others in time or space or degree
First
 and foremost
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individual
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an individual
the individual
 may get a higher
scores
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score
 in exams if they memorize the content of
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 learning it is
great and easy way
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a great and easy way
 to learn during a short time
mostly
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most
 children are using
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 method way to learn anything they
acheive
to gain with effort
achieve
 a good marks in exams and tests
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, children have better performance in some study through
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 learning method. On the flip side, there are some disadvantages of
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 learning
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, the knowledge acquired by
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 is not retained for long time people does not repeat information learnt by
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few days
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a few days
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 the whole thing can be forgotten.
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 it can be very boring to learn everything by
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. To conclud
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I
i believe that studying by
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 should be
encourge
inspired with confidence
encouraged
d at a minimum level because its
stiffie
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s student thinking skills and discourage them to learn actively

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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