Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams such as football. Other people think that taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming or running. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The benefits of playing sports are usually undeniable. While it

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is argued

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sports

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as football is better for players, I personally believe that the advantages resulted from individual sports are more significant since they can nurture the independence and self-reliance culture. It is understandable why many people tend to be

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sports, particularly because they enable players to hone their teamwork skills. Since sports played in teams often require

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team effort

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a team effort

, every member has to learn how to collaborate. Take my niece as an example; he used to be a self-

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boy who

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never takes

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other’s opinions into consideration. Since he joined a football club in his school, he has to learn not only how to work out the strategy for each match with his teammates but

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practice football skills with them. Now, He usually spends hours discussing with his teammates about how to dribble and pass the ball, and he even changed his traditional style of playing for the benefits of the whole

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type of sport has taught my niece about the power of solidarity in a teamwork job.

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, individual sports can provide participants with valuable lessons about self-reliance. Playing a solo sport, players will be the one who determine their chances of winning, which incentivize them to try their best

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of relying on the support of others. One example is the swimming athlete Le Thi Anh

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who has broken the world record in the Olympic 2008. In an interview, she said that what made her so strong is the discipline of self-reliance and determination. Her story of how she overcame all her injuries by herself and how she fought against her own laziness and limits in every training session was remarkable. Clearly, if it had not been for her independence in training, she would not have reaped

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a huge success. All things considered, I believe that It would be more advantageous when players pursuit individual sports.