Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?
In today's world, the number of young
married has
decreased drastically in a modern Accept comma addition
married, has
society
. I personally believe that young couples should comprise a family with children when they are older than 30 years old. This
essay will discuss both views, using arguments and example from BBC news and Queensland University to demonstrate points and prove arguments
On the one hand, there is ample evidence in enriching and strengthening a family in the developing and developed nations. This
is largely because educational academics, economic status
and cultural traditions are constantly changing since the advent of the Internet. Young individuals prioritize certain task
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task, such
such
as their employment status
, educational achievements and living standards as a result
of the vast information and knowledge received from the online world. For example
, recent empirical research by Queensland University suggested that 20% of young couples aims to set priorities in their life
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life, such
such
as afford a car or house and the last
goal is to establish a family and have children. Therefore
, it is conclusively clear that young families prefer to delay their married status
in order to strengthen their financial status
and educational records for the sake of social well-being.
On the other hand
, although
there is a case to be made for delaying the situation of having children and married status
, the impact of this
trend on the society
cannot be overstated. The population growth is an essential requirement for a modern society
, countries rely on substantial economic development and without having enough population they
cannot guarantee a better living standard for their city-dweller. Accept comma addition
population, they
For example
, an article published by BBC News showed China and India support campaigns for young family with children by promoting a job and household in remote areas. Conclusively, it is possible to state beyond doubt that authorities
should foster and support a substantial population growth among Suggestion
the authorities
youngest
families.
To conclude from the arguments and points given I firmly believe that young people should prioritize their personal goals before getting married and having children. In the future, the importance of building a modern Suggestion
younger
society
will have more challenges.Submitted by renzotj on
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