Some people think that way to reduce crimes is long term prisons while others think that there are other ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Crimes are inevitable nowadays.

Everyday

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Every day

, there are numerous burglaries, murders, robberies,...

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place in almost everywhere on the planet.

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The government

Government

has set out efficient rules to reduce crimes. One of them is sending the guilty person to prison. Many people state that those who commit to crime should be sentenced to long

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prisons, whereas others argue that there are different approaches to cut down crimes. In

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essay, I will discuss both claims from my own point of view.

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of all, it cannot be denied that long

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prisons are essential. To the best of my knowledge, criminals are very dangerous, especially murderers. Many of whom are cold-blooded, which can lead to miserable situations. As can be seen clearly, many

muderers

a criminal who commits homicide (who performs the unlawful premeditated killing of another human being)

murderers

are unwilling to turn over a new leaf after having

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their judgement.

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, they are likely to commit to crime once they get out of jails. In

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cases, I

belive

accept as true; take to be true

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putting these people behind bars is the best solution to reduce crimes.

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, a great deal of prisoners was sentenced to long

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prisons because of their sins in the past.

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is a way to make them repent themselves of what they have done.

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, a number of prisoners realise their guilty actions soon enough to earn themselves a

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characterized by grandeur

magnificent

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can be an encouragement from the public for them to make a better life for themselves.

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, long

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prisons can indirectly cause crimes.

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, if people are sentenced to

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prison

for too long, their relatives may feel unfair and

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cause crime as a way to revenge the

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

.

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, not everyone deserves long

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prisons. In fact, we should give them a

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chance to make a new life. To sum up, I agree

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both statements.

Gorverment

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Government

should work out the best solutions to reduce the rate of crimes in every country.