As a result of electronic inventions, people do less physical activity and this is having a negative effect on their health To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is said that electronic equipments like computers and televisions prevent people from doing physical work and

this

lead to problems for people's

health

. I partly concur with

this

idea. In my point of view, due to using these inventions without control, people have a lot of

health

problems.

Nevertheless

, there are other factors which cause negative effects on the

health

of people. For lots of people regardless of ages, electronic inventions

such

as computers and television have become a popular form of entertainment. They spend almost their free time using them for entertaining themselves.

Therefore

,

this

affects negatively people's

health

. Sitting a lot

for

Suggestion

of

entertainment is one of the most common reasons lead to overweight and back problems.

In addition

, concentrate completely on a screen in a long time can cause short-sighted.

However

, these equipments is not the only factors which cause

health

problems. Some people are fond of food, especially fast food. They eat a lot and

as a result

, they have some problems related to

health

such

as overweight.

Moreover

, some of them are tired and sick of workout every day so they give up and decide to do something more captivating and easier than like chatting to their friends or doing the shopping. These make their weight hard to be lost.

Therefore there

Accept comma addition

Therefore, there

can be thousands of factors which contribute to overweight and other

health

problems. In conclusion, using computers or televisions in a long time is negative for people.

However

, due to manifold reasons,

health

problems begin appearing.