It is inevitable that traditional culture will be lost when technology develops . Technology and traditional culture are incampitable

In the current scenario
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it is believed by some that
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the advancement
of automated devices will lead to the fall of traditional
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In my view
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I reckon with the statement that traditional
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and machine is incompatible To commence with, There several reasons which points out that
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the advancement
of machinery has played a vital role in the betterment of society
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, the field of communication
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have benefited
have benefitted
the most
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for example
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due to various
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apps
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as Skype
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etc
continuing in the same way
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communication
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Communication
with people have become easier
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due to the foundation of solar panels the consumption of gasoline is reduced.
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technologies
in most rural areas internet has become easily accessible, due to electronic car the consumption of fuel
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as petrol
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diesel has decreased.The decrease in fuel leads to the reduction in co2 consumption (one of the course of
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involving the entire earth; not limited or provincial in scope
global
warming). Despite all these benefits
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one of the
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reasons
for the fall of traditional
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As communication improves
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and brings education to both developed and developing countries. More and more people will discover what the world has to give outside circle
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especially the young ones who are curious to discover the world outside by leaving their traditions. In conclusions, a
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person's
character depends upon his traditions and his surroundings.Apart from that
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a
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represents their legacy
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It is important to preserve them
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so that the future generations can learn more about their ancestors
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Which is possible by maintaining balance with technology and traditional
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