Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at 21. To what extent do you agree?

There is an opinion that people should marry once they have reached the legal

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of 21 years old. I strongly disagree with

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viewpoint as I believe it is much more vital to be financially ready before getting married, while emphasizing on considering oneself whether they have the emotional capability to enter a life of

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of all, being financially stable should be the initial priority of people before settling down to a

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continuing through life

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commitment to their partners. A key reason for

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is that,

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, they will not be able to provide the necessities to sustain a long-term

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, young Asian people have been establishing

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their professional careers, which can save them enough money essential for expenses

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as building a fully-furnished house, buying a car, and experiencing an unforgettable wedding with their future spouse. While it can be argued that the right

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for marrying someone is 21, people should primarily focus

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on the importance of building themselves to achieve financial security.

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, achieving emotional capability is

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considered a crucial factor when committing oneself to

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is because individuals must

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understand themselves

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in a realistic manner

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until deciding whether they can share their life with another person. Without

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mentality, it can be difficult to develop and form a healthy, long-term relationship.

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, young adults in Asia have considerably transformed their outlook in marriages, in

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a way they consider

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in becoming emotionally independent before deciding to tie the knot with their partners.

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it is required to reach

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legal

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, understanding one’s emotional maturity is significant for the cultivation of relationships. In conclusion, considering 21 years old as the legal

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of

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is becoming a norm in some parts of the world.

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, I believe people should cultivate themselves

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first

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, both in financial and emotional aspects, as

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is an essential prerequisite to achieving a happy and

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continuing through life

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marriage

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