News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in a newspaper. What factors do you think influence their decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

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The announcement is determined by data editors that which news appeared on television or reported in the newspaper. What features do you expect to influence their choices?

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depends on what customers prefer.

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Does

we effect because of hideous news?

yes

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Yes

, it impacts people's feelings. Would it be superior if more blessing information was published?

yes

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Yes

, it would be owing to spread positive energy.

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, it is related to the watcher style and what he/she

favors

promote over another

favours

and that designer's important to attract the customer and to satisfy their needs. So, the channel raises not only

profit but

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profit, but

also

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distinction. According to, the age, the region and the gander.

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, the children admire the stories and cartoons related to their age US artist

make

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makes

fairytales

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fairy tales

that is

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suitable for the youngest.

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, not all the types of movies are acceptable regarding, the belief they follow.

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, men and women have a different interest in what they watch.

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, it's must put under consideration.

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, the negative shows affect and hurt deeply the people and leave a black sight of the world and distribute the terrifying sense that ancestors afraid of facing a situation like that.

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, sharing hopeful one emphasizes that there is a generous in life and encourages the inhabitance that there will be hope for living a better life.

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, the news related to earthquakes and crimes in channel 8 distribute scaring from life. In conclusion, the television and newspaper brightly impact on the person's mood. I recommend that planners should limit the awful news and not just repeat it in the

major

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majority

of the channels and put more progress in the kind of avenues.

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broadcast
print
news editors
viewership
readership
ratings
revenue
sensational stories
scandals
dramatic events
relevance
societal issues
prominence
political influences
corporate influences
biases
ownership
political affiliations
immediacy
locality
target audience
human interest stories
emotional responses
desensitization
public apathy
indifference
optimistic outlook
community achievements
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News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in a newspaper. What factors do you think influence their decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

Your opinion

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In some countries, more and more people are people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Some people think that it is beneficial for children to do paid work, while others think that it can be harmful for children. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children doing paid work?

Organised tours to remote places and communities are increasingly popular. Is this a positive or negative development for the local people and the local environment?