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Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries, but it's disadvantages should not be overlooked. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In
this
 modern era of globalisation, higher incomes are earned by the means of
tourism
,
however
, it's demerits should not be ignored. So, I totally agree with it and
this
 essay will portray about the specified statement in detail.
First
 of all, as we know that,
government
Suggestion
the government
 generates massive capital through overseas tourists.
Therefore
,
this
 tends to increase national income of a country. To illustrate, I would like to cite that, it is quite known that, Dubai is a great spot for different visitors and renowned for its
tourism
 business. Not only
this
, but
also
, it has become one of the richest nation because of
tourism
, despite being small in size as well as having least sources like water and electricity.
Thus
,
this
 has numerous benefits and should be continued. But, on the flip side, it has some limitations, too, which should be kept in mind.
For instance
, whenever foreign voyagers visit to a place, there occurs a hurdle of diversity in cultures, languages, clothes, food and lifestyle
also
. As a consequence, these circumstances lead
to disturb
Suggestion
to disturbing
 the uniformity of a territory's own culture, mother tongue, cuisines and many more.
Such
 as, in Dubai we can observe that folks who actually relates to
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 religions, but are living in that realm has resulted in inequity in living styles and
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 things
also
. For these causes,
tourism
's drawbacks should be emphasized. In conclusion, I pen down by saying that
although
 there are
diverse
Suggestion
diversified
 benefits of
tourism
 like large revenues, but still its shortcomings, as in, dissimilarity in various matters, should not be overlooked.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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