Nowadays there are more opportunities for women than there were in the past. Some people think this situation caused more problems than it has solved. What are your opinion on this?

As the

times

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time

changes,

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changes as well. For

long time

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a long time

, there was a discrimination against women, they were considered useless in anything aside from housework.

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, fortunately nowadays it

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has changed

drastically, making

equality not

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equality, not

a mere wish for women. They now have many opportunities to study, work, travel, in short, they are free to do things according to their own will.

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, some people still believe that

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a great number

of opportunities caused more problem than it has solved. From my point of view, it is unreasonable to say that.

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and foremost, in the past,

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a larger number

of opportunities created a possibility for women to prove themselves worthy to the

society

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of men, changing

society

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to the equal one. In the past, women were married off against their will and had to do housework every day because they were considered weak and not intelligent. That has changed when women started to get

education

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an education

,

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were

we are

we're

able to start work in the fields of science and education, which proved that they are intelligent and capable as much as men are.

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,

society

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became more open-minded and acceptable

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for

women. They now can choose what they want to do,

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they can decide for themselves whom to be with, giving birth to a child or not. What is more, they dedicate themselves to their work and humanity,

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, caring and treating sick people, doing research in different fields of science and liberal arts, fighting for

humans’

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human

rights and even serving

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for

in

of

the country in the battlefield. In the end, there are problems, but they are more personal and cannot be considered to be consequences of

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the escalating number

escalating numbers

of opportunities for women.