Air transportation is increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to other countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. Some people say this is good other believe that the use of air transport for this purpose is not justified. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Since transportation is developing, it is directly
influencing
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influenced
on commerce. Currently
air
transport
is
most common type
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the most common type
of transportation
to
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for
importing agricultural products from foreign countries which is
throught
all the way through
throughout
thought
through
the year. Some people claim that the best
way dragging
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way, dragging
products is
air
transport whereas
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transport, whereas
others stick to the opposite opinion. I want to discuss both sides of
abovementioned topic
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the above mentioned topic
above mentioned topic
. It is admittedly that, everything has a pros and cons, so
air
transport
too.
However it
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However, it
has a positive
sides
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side
than negatives.
Firstly
,
this
transport
supply outputs as a quickly to bidders.
This
will ensure that everything is on time.
Secondly
, it is very vital to deliver products suitable for customers.
That is
why
tge
definite article
the
air
transport
is dependable and the products will not be damaged during flight.
Finally
, we have to consider,
this
type of transports can give more
conviniences
things that make you comfortable and at ease
conveniences
convenience
for people.
On the other hand
, it has some kinds of disadvantages which id involved to human's exigencies. The products which come
to from abroad are
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from abroad are
much expensive, in our market price. But it is essential to mention that, they are deserving to consumption.
Moreover
, in some cases, various illnesses can occur due to inadequate or poorly trained
laboures
someone who works with their hands; someone engaged in manual labor
labourers
.
For instance
, different
bacteriums
(microbiology) single-celled or noncellular spherical or spiral or rod-shaped organisms lacking chlorophyll that reproduce by fission; important as pathogens and for biochemical properties; taxonomy is difficult; often considered to be plants
bacteria
and viruses are reduced people health.
Therefore
everyone should be control to food-stuffs and more attention before
consume
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consuming
them In conclusion, I would say that everything
depend
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depends
on carefulness. The type of transportation
is not relate
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doesn't relate
does not relate
is not related
to the quality of products. If dispatchers can package truly his/her products, nothing will
impect
the striking of one body against another
impact
inspect
on the box of fruits and
vegatables
edible seeds or roots or stems or leaves or bulbs or tubers or nonsweet fruits of any of numerous herbaceous plant
vegetables
vegetable
.
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