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Can individuals take actions that protect the environment?

#individuals #actions #environment
Environmental protection can be the responsibility of each person. Each person can make an important impact with small changes related to caring for the
environment
. There are many ways that individuals can take
actions
Suggestion
action
 in order to protect the
environment
such
 as buying environmentally friendly products which include reusable and recyclable products and electronic devices with EnergyStar ratings. Another way for an individual to help the
environment
 is by applying the 3Rs, which is
reuse
Suggestion
reused
, reduce and recycle. People can start practicing
3Rs
Suggestion
the 3Rs
 by reducing consumption of disposable products, reusing and recycling items when applicable
instead
 of throwing them away or putting them in landfills.
On the other hand
, the individuals who are passionate about protecting the
environment
 and work for government agencies or international organizations can encourage the citizens to be aware of their responsibilities in terms of protecting the
environment
 because not everyone is aware of it. There is a study showing that after the introduction of a campaign “say no to
single use
Suggestion
the single use
 of plastic” launched by a climate change organization, there was a reduction in
the number
Suggestion
the amount
 of plastic wastes. Being informed of the action individuals can take part in and the consequences of taking the actions, individuals might be more active in protecting and avoiding harm to the
environment
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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