Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, the number of people eating

nonvegetarian

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non vegetarian

has started declining. Even some people chose to be vegan because they believe that eating animals can impact their health as well as the whole world.

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essay is going to discuss the reason behind

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view and

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going to state examples to support the view.

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, animals

play

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plays

a very vital role in maintaining the ecological balance of the earth.

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, the animal provides us many useful products

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as silk, milk, leather etc. Killing animals for the purpose of food can decline their

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population, which

can disturb the biological cycle of the earth. In one of the recent studies, I read that at least 200 species of animals are decreasing because of human meat consumption habits.

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, we can say that eating meat can have a huge impact on the whole earth.

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, the interaction of germs transferred from the animal body can cause unforeseen harm to the human body.

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, in one of the newspapers, it was published that the Coronavirus issue with which all the countries are currently going through is caused by eating bats.

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, they are

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a few advantages of eating animal

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as eating fish will keep the body

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warm, especially

in winters, drinking chicken soup can help a person to cure broken leg.

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, we can say that eating animals can sometimes cause serious health issues. To summarize, we can conclude that eating meat or fish has both pros and cons. In my opinion, it should be an individual decision to have it or not to have it.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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272 words

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Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Your opinion

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