You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Sir, I would like to express my gratitude for allocating me an
accomodation
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accommodation
at the college hostel.
However
, I am writing
this
letter to inform you about my dissatisfaction with my roommate and requesting you to shift me
in
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a separate single room from
upcoming
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month. It is true that
,
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two people thoughts and habits will not be the same when they live in a room. Despite
of
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having so many problems living together, I am stating some of those are very serious. Begin with, he used to stay awake till
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late
night
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and keep watching movies and listen
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a very loud music
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.
Moreover
, he allows visitors often at our place and doing
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all night long while keeping the lights on until they are finished.
In addition
to that, he uses my belongings without prior permission and missing regularly.
For instance
, during my terms, it makes me struggle more on concentrating my studies and having a good night’s sleep.
As a result
, I cannot do well in exams and
consequently
getting poor grades. In
this
circumstance, I cannot let it go as it is affecting my health and study both ways and needed to change my accommodation immediately.
Therefore
, I would be grateful if you could arrange
me
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a single room
from
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following
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month. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Mahmudul Hasan
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accommodation officer
  • roommate
  • share a room
  • living arrangement
  • difficult to work
  • noise levels
  • study environment
  • privacy concerns
  • alternative accommodation
  • single room
  • academic performance
  • well-being
  • respectfully request
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