You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Sir, I would like to express my gratitude for allocating me an

accomodation

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accommodation

at the college hostel.

However

, I am writing

this

letter to inform you about my dissatisfaction with my roommate and requesting you to shift me

in

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a separate single room from

upcoming

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month. It is true that

,

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two people thoughts and habits will not be the same when they live in a room. Despite

of

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having so many problems living together, I am stating some of those are very serious. Begin with, he used to stay awake till

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late

night

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and keep watching movies and listen

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a very loud music

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.

Moreover

, he allows visitors often at our place and doing

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all night long while keeping the lights on until they are finished.

In addition

to that, he uses my belongings without prior permission and missing regularly.

For instance

, during my terms, it makes me struggle more on concentrating my studies and having a good night’s sleep.

As a result

, I cannot do well in exams and

consequently

getting poor grades. In

this

circumstance, I cannot let it go as it is affecting my health and study both ways and needed to change my accommodation immediately.

Therefore

, I would be grateful if you could arrange

me

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a single room

from

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following

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month. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Mahmudul Hasan