You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Sir, I would like to express my gratitude for allocating me an

accomodation

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accommodation

at the college hostel.

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, I am writing

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letter to inform you about my dissatisfaction with my roommate and requesting you to shift me

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a separate single room from

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month. It is true that

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two people thoughts and habits will not be the same when they live in a room. Despite

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having so many problems living together, I am stating some of those are very serious. Begin with, he used to stay awake till

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late

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and keep watching movies and listen

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a very loud music

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, he allows visitors often at our place and doing

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all night long while keeping the lights on until they are finished.

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to that, he uses my belongings without prior permission and missing regularly.

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, during my terms, it makes me struggle more on concentrating my studies and having a good night’s sleep.

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, I cannot do well in exams and

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getting poor grades. In

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circumstance, I cannot let it go as it is affecting my health and study both ways and needed to change my accommodation immediately.

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, I would be grateful if you could arrange

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a single room

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month. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Mahmudul Hasan

mmustarek

Feb 20, 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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230 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

accommodation officer
roommate
share a room
living arrangement
difficult to work
noise levels
study environment
privacy concerns
alternative accommodation
single room
academic performance
well-being
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