You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir,
I would like to express my gratitude for allocating me an
accomodation
at the college hostel. Correct your spelling
accommodation
However
, I am writing Linking Words
this
letter to inform you about my dissatisfaction with my roommate and requesting you to shift me Linking Words
in
a separate single room from Change preposition
to
upcoming
month.
It is true that Add an article
the upcoming
an upcoming
,
two people thoughts and habits will not be the same when they live in a room. Despite Remove the comma
apply
of
having so many problems living together, I am stating some of those are very serious. Begin with, he used to stay awake till Remove the preposition
apply
the
late Correct article usage
apply
night
and keep watching movies and listenChange preposition
at night
Add the preposition
to
a very loud music
. Remove the article
very loud music
a piece of very loud music
Moreover
, he allows visitors often at our place and doing Linking Words
party
all night long while keeping the lights on until they are finished. Fix the agreement mistake
parties
In addition
to that, he uses my belongings without prior permission and missing regularly.
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For instance
, during my terms, it makes me struggle more on concentrating my studies and having a good night’s sleep. Linking Words
As a result
, I cannot do well in exams and Linking Words
consequently
getting poor grades. In Linking Words
this
circumstance, I cannot let it go as it is affecting my health and study both ways and needed to change my accommodation immediately.
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Therefore
, I would be grateful if you could arrange Linking Words
me
a single room Correct pronoun usage
apply
from
Change preposition
for
following
month.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Mahmudul HasanChange the article
the following
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