IELTS Writing Task 2/ IELTS Essay: You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. You should write at least 250 words.

Some people

agrued

present reasons and arguments

argued

agreed

that learning at home is the best way for children’s growth, but others think that parents should send their kids to

school

.

In

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From

my point of view, I think children who attend to

school

have more experience than children who join in homeschooling. On the one hand, it is essential to send children to public or private

school

.Right here, children have a chance to develop their human beings. Day by day, they can acquire knowledge from life lessons about their local or over world. So, gradually it enriches

children’s mind

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the child’s mind

child’s mind

and they become more self-confident when making new friends. Another factor to consider is attending

to

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school

school

not only helps children develop their mind but

also their body

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their body also

.

For instance

, playing sports outside studying hours helps them to challenge and improve themselves.

Furthermore

, it

also

teaches them how to work in a team effectively and develops their physical strength.

Therefore

, children who study at

school

can have

good

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better

opportunities for themselves in the future.

On the other hand

, homeschooling is better for children who need especial intention.

To

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Two

particular children, they don’t need care or notice from others. Some parents are often worried

of

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about

their children’s health

hence

they choose homeschooling to easily look after their children.In low family, they always hesitate to pay money for children’s studying because of high fee.

For example

, if children learn at home, parents will save

amount

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the amount

an amount

amounts

of money for family life.

Consequently

, I think Students can focus on subject very effective when they learn alone without friends of social activities. I think it brings both benefit and negation, but in general,

this

is not a

best

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good

better

way for children’s growth. In conclusion,

school

has much advantage for students’ development and for parenting. Following me, I totally encourage that attending to

school

is very important. I hope the government will enforce laws for

compulsive attendant

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the compulsive attendant

a compulsive attendant

to

school

.

Besides

,

government

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the government

also cut

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also cuts

down fee appropriate for low family and encourage them to send their children to

school

as soon as.