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Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples.

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In today’s world, children have become cleaver. Whatever, they are looking, watching, listening in
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
 and those things are understood quickly by social media.
This
 has sparked ongoing controversy. Which is inevitable leads to a moot
questions
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question
weather
introduces two alternatives
whether
 parents
also
 should take responsibility to their child until they are at least 17 age
so on
in the near future
soon
. In
this
 essay I will give my personal view as parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. In other hand, we can clearly see that parents have more responsibility for their children, as well as, some social activity, even. It
is given
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gives
 freedom to
wandering
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wander
 by parents.
Additionally
, both her parents drop
to
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in
 school and come to
home
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the home
.
Moreover
, to cooking food theirs afternoon
at
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in
 time. These are accountable task for their parents.
Consequently
, kids take their
advantage
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advantage, for
for example
 kids does not consider about their parents. They want only enjoy,
outdoors game
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outdoor, game
outdoor game
, they do not focus on study and exam after than
they
of them or themselves
their
 joint wrong group of friends. All other hand, children are the reflection of their parents. How a child behaves in society is dependent upon their parents have taught him and how they themselves behave
for
example if
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example, if
 he see
violent movie
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a violent movie
violent movies
 in at home he will grow up with violent nature. In conclusion, it is my opinion parents should give more time to their children and focus on their activity to do so.
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