Some people believe that it is the duty of parents to choose good and bad of their children should decide it on their own. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Deciding the realistic path for the bright future is too crucial.
Therefore
,
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,
the
argue
force or impel in an indicated direction
urge
age
is discussed between people that parents should take decisions of their children's life while other prefer to offsprings.
Thus
,
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,
I
also
tune with the former view. On the one hand, parents have much experience and knowledge because they
also
pass out from the childish
age so
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age, so
, parents know well about what is good or bad for their
child
in
this
age
, as everyone knows that the scientific research reveals that childhood time is the best time for
tne
definite article
the
overall growth of the
child
physically or
mently
in your mind
mentally
.
That is
why it is vital role of parents to look after their
child
and take
decision
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decisions
a decision
with
lot
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a lot
of thinking which is good for their bright future.
Moreover
pschologists
a scientist trained in psychology
psychologists
express that
their
in or at that place
there
is a great effect of activities done by parents
infront
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in front
of
child
because in the childish
age whatever
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age, whatever
urge whatever
a
child
see
female pronoun; a female, or something regarded as female, e.g. a ship
she
has great effect on his personality and thinking. So, with the
asist
give help or assistance; be of service
assist
of
parents juveniles
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parents, juveniles
learn about their moral values, culture and traditions
i
reflexive form of "me"
myself
I
.
e
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E
how to give respect to elder and how to deal with customs and what they can do for their culture?
On the other hand
, if parents do not permit their children to choose right or wrong in the childhood
age
,
then
offsprings have no capability or confidence to tackle the
further
hassal
an angry disturbance
hassle
of their life.
Therefore
, it is suggested to parents to encourage and support their children to do well in their life and give them knowledge about what's good or bad. Before putting my pen down, I urge that
although
children can do well for themselves yet parents can make
good decision
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good decisions
a good decision
by their experience.
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