Some people believe that education is the key to tackling hunger worldwide while others feel that the answer is in food aid. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Some people argue that education is the most important factor in mitigating

world

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hunger

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while

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

believe that providing

food

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aid is more beneficial.

Although

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food

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aids could

temporirly

for a limited time only; not permanently

temporarily

resolve

food

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scarcity among poor and starving people, I believe educating people on how to handle resources

efficently

with efficiency; in an efficient manner

efficiently

is more productive. Many opine that

food

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aid projects are best solution to end the

hunger

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crisis in the

world

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because they help people who

can not

cannot

afford meals.

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to say that those who have

abundent

present in great quantity

abundant

food

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commodities or resources should provide their help to people who are on the verge of starvation in order to immediately save them from malnutrition.

For instance

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, when South Africa suffered

food

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crisis, UN mission provided them with

food

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containers worth million of dollars and it helped the country in overcoming the

food

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scarcity.

Although

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such

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food

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aids could provide an immediate help, I believe educating people

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to be

more beneficial in a

longer

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long

run.

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, some argue that education should solve

world

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hunger

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because by teaching people on how to effectively

ultise

put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose

utilize

resources, the scarcity of

food

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will

ceasae

put an end to a state or an activity

cease

cause

to exist. When people are trained on not to waste

food

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and use their meals in an effective manner, they could save tons of

food

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yearly,

as a result

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effectively reducing risk of

hunger

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Nepal’s school educational program on

food

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ultisation

the act of using

utilization

utilisation

, which was introduced in 2012, has

help

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helped

the country in saving billion of tons of raw vegetables yearly and decreasing the

likeihood

the probability of a specified outcome

likelihood

of country wide

hunger

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, in my opinion education can completely

erradicate

kill in large numbers

eradicate

the

world

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hunger

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. In conclusion, many believe that providing aid will rid

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world

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the world

of its

hunger

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, I believe that educating people, especially

childrens

a young person of either sex

children

children's

, is

best way

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the best way

to end

this

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food

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crisis.

Mon Feb 24 2020

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

295 words

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Some people believe that education is the key to tackling hunger worldwide while others feel that the answer is in food aid. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

In many countries, the gap between the rich and poor is widening. What problems can this cause, and what solutions can you suggest?

There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this.

“Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?”

Many people around the world use social media every day to keep in touch with other people and get news events.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?