The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries.
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The given tables represent the
sales
of
tea
and pineapples in five European
countries
in 2010 and 2015.
Overall
, It can be seen that
sales
of
tea
have increased in every
countries
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country
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,
while
sales
of pineapple increased in some
countries
.
According to
the first table,
Tea
sales
have risen especially in France from 2.5 in 2010
million
to 21
million
in 2015
whereas
other
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in other
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countries
increase slightly
around
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0.2 to 4
million
euros.
For instance
,
sales
in Austria with 8
million
euros were two times higher than
sales
of
tea
in 2010. In the
second
table, It is noticeable that
pineapples
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pineapple
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sales
have grown dramatically in Austria, 32
million
euros higher than in 2010.
Furthermore
,
sales
in France and
Netherland
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Netherlands
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have doubled from 2 to 6.5 and 1.6 to 5 respectively.
In contrast
,
sales
in Norway and Germany have declined. Their
sales
dropped to 2 from 2.8 for
Nor way
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Norway
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and 1.9 from 3 for Germany.
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