The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries.
The given tables represent the
sales
of tea
and pineapples in five European countries
in 2010 and 2015.
Overall
, It can be seen that sales
of tea
have increased in every countries
, Change to a singular noun
country
while
sales
of pineapple increased in some countries
.
According to
the first table, Tea
sales
have risen especially in France from 2.5 in 2010 million
to 21 million
in 2015 whereas
other
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in other
countries
increase slightly around
0.2 to 4 Change preposition
to around
million
euros. For instance
, sales
in Austria with 8 million
euros were two times higher than sales
of tea
in 2010.
In the second
table, It is noticeable that pineapples
Change the noun form
pineapple
sales
have grown dramatically in Austria, 32 million
euros higher than in 2010. Furthermore
, sales
in France and Netherland
have doubled from 2 to 6.5 and 1.6 to 5 respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
Netherlands
In contrast
, sales
in Norway and Germany have declined. Their sales
dropped to 2 from 2.8 for Nor way
and 1.9 from 3 for Germany.Correct your spelling
Norway
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