In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

In many countries, there are a lot of young students who stimulated the interest of working and travelling during a year after graduating high school and before beginning university education.
This
essay will discuss the advantages and drawbacks for the people who come to decide to do
this
. There are two main advantages of taking a year out between a high school and college studies are relaxing and work-experiencing for younger students.
Firstly
, students get tired from long academy years and they need to travel fox resting.
This
way, they are able to learn a new language, culture and it probably helps them in their future life.
Secondly
, it is a great way to have work experience. So, being economical free and not depending on the family’s encourages, they know how to stay on their leg from early ages.
For instance
, the most successful businessmen in my country are thankful for their success for that time which they took out before university life.
However
, taking a period out between school and institute has
also
some disadvantages, like staying far away from education and wasting a year. In the
first
place, to take a break sometimes effects badly when it used not an appropriate time.
Also
, living without a reputation can cause forgetting knowledge.
On the other hand
,
this
may be a waste of time for not-old people in the job areas. Because if a person hasn’t got a diploma it is too difficult for him or her to find a job with a high salary.
For example
, most companies require a university diploma. To conclude,
although
it has certain advantages like to take a rest and live economical free, there are
also
disadvantages
such
as standing away from the learning and have to live on a low budget. I believe that there are more drawbacks than outweighs in
this
situation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural immersion
  • Life experience
  • Work ethic
  • Career readiness
  • Self-discovery
  • Delayed gratification
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