computers are becoming an essential part of school lessons. discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

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At school
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computers are one of the necessary parts of the subjects among the students. Nowadays schools are providing computers and
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students prefer to choose a
computer
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lesson
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as a
part
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of the education. Computers are becoming a trend in schools and
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computer
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lessons are more interesting
amon
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am on
the
students but
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students, but
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there is
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a negative impact
on
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students'
student
health
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essay will discuss the advantage and disadvantage of the
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lesson
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at school. Choosing a
computer
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lesson
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as a
part
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of the subject gives bad impact on
student's
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the student's health
health
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and reduce the thinking ability. I agree to
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point because, nowadays most of the schools are providing
computer
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as a
part
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of the
lesson
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. But
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leads to
health
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issues because being too long
infront
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in front
of
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computer
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a computer
the computer
will reduce eye power so half of the students are wearing spectacles at school. Even students are using computers at home, for extra activities for playing
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games
, watching videos too,
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causes severe
eye damage so
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eye damage, so
they prefer to use spectacle at small age onward and
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now we can write a homework from
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because all answers are available in computers so
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reduces the thinking ability, and it won't help in the future. If I take one of my
friend
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friends
as an example, she is more interested in
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lesson
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and she will sit
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in front
of the
computer
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for a long
period but
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period, but
now she is admitted in the hospital, doctors are saying the power of the
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affected the eye and she have to wear spectacles for the whole life until she dies.
Computer
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lesson
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will encourage
students
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student
students'
activities and
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it is very
helful
providing assistance or serving a useful function
helpful
in their future to seek a
job
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. It is because nowadays majority officers are asking a qualification certificate for
computer
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lessons to give a
job
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. For every
job
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, we need
computer
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knowledge so
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computer
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plays major role in our life and
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we can search for everything whatever we need.
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, one of my cousins didn't get qualified on any other subjects except
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lesson but
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lesson, but
now he is a manager
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in
an office. In conclusion, choosing a
computer
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as a
part
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of
lesson
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will give good opportunities for the
job
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.
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it would spoil our
health
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.

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  • Digital literacy
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