computers are becoming an essential part of school lessons. discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

At school
,
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,
computers are one of the necessary parts of the subjects among the students. Nowadays schools are providing computers and
also
students prefer to choose a
computer
lesson
as a
part
of the education. Computers are becoming a trend in schools and
also
computer
lessons are more interesting
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am on
the
students but
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students, but
on the other hand
there is
negative impact
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a negative impact
on
students
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students'
student
health
.
This
essay will discuss the advantage and disadvantage of the
computer
lesson
at school. Choosing a
computer
lesson
as a
part
of the subject gives bad impact on
student's
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the student's health
health
and reduce the thinking ability. I agree to
this
point because, nowadays most of the schools are providing
computer
as a
part
of the
lesson
. But
this
leads to
health
issues because being too long
infront
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in front
of
computer
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a computer
the computer
will reduce eye power so half of the students are wearing spectacles at school. Even students are using computers at home, for extra activities for playing
game
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games
, watching videos too,
this
causes severe
eye damage so
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eye damage, so
they prefer to use spectacle at small age onward and
also
now we can write a homework from
computer
because all answers are available in computers so
this
reduces the thinking ability, and it won't help in the future. If I take one of my
friend
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friends
as an example, she is more interested in
computer
lesson
and she will sit
infront
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in front
of the
computer
for a long
period but
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period, but
now she is admitted in the hospital, doctors are saying the power of the
computer
affected the eye and she have to wear spectacles for the whole life until she dies.
Computer
lesson
will encourage
students
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student
students'
activities and
also
it is very
helful
providing assistance or serving a useful function
helpful
in their future to seek a
job
. It is because nowadays majority officers are asking a qualification certificate for
computer
lessons to give a
job
. For every
job
, we need
computer
knowledge so
this
computer
plays major role in our life and
also
we can search for everything whatever we need.
For example
, one of my cousins didn't get qualified on any other subjects except
computer
lesson but
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lesson, but
now he is a manager
at
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in
an office. In conclusion, choosing a
computer
as a
part
of
lesson
will give good opportunities for the
job
.
On the other hand
it would spoil our
health
.

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