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Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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Some people argue that to be happy in a
life
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 a
person
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 should be married
with
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to
 somebody who appeals to him. Others consider marriage more like a financial deal where one
person
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 is attracted to
money
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 of his future spouse.
As a
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result he
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result, he
 or she feels more confident in the unpredictable world. I support a point of view that individuals who marry for
love
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 experience more happiness and
,
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,
overall, are more joyful during their
life
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. There is no doubt that
love
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 is one of the strongest feelings in the world.
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, those who experience it, become more satisfied with their
life
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. People who are lucky to fell in
love
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 and, eventually, get
married have
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married, have
 warmer
realationship
a relation between people; ('relationship' is often used where 'relation' would serve, as in 'the relationship between inflation and unemployment', but the preferred usage of 'relationship' is for human relations or states of relatedness)
relationships
 during all their
life
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.
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, children in
such
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 families are more successful because they were brought up in the atmosphere of
love
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 and kindness. A good illustration of
this
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 is the relationship between the previous USA president Barak Obama and his wife, who met each other in their twenties and still are an excellent example of a true
love
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. It is
Micchelle
United States aviator and general who was an early advocate of military air power (1879-1936)
Mitchell
Obama who
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Obama, who
 supported him during all his career and helped to achieve the highest results.
On the contrary
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, it is thought by some people that
money
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 can buy true happiness and
love
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. Those
indidivuals
a human being
individuals
 claim that goods
such
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 as cars, houses, clothes could replace them the true joy from the feeling. From their point of view, it is much more crucial to have an
oppurtunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
 to travel all over the world and spend
money
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 on delicious
cousine
the practice or manner of preparing food or the food so prepared
cuisine
instead
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 of having a beloved
person
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 with whom they can share these experiences. According to the recent
reseach
systematic investigation to establish facts
research
researches
, more than 1/3 couples in Russia
have
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has
 a considerable age gap, where a man is much older than a female in a marriage. It means that there is an increasing number females who prefer to get married
with
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to
 rich men who have enough
money
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 to support his future family. In conclusion, people who are married for
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love
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love's
 gain much more
satisfation
the contentment one feels when one has fulfilled a desire, need, or expectation
satisfaction
 from their
life
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, they share their different
numorous
amounting to a large indefinite number
numerous
humorous
 experiences with their beloved
person
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.
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, if
money
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 of a spouse is a necessity for some people, they will feel
fullfield
completed to perfection
fulfilled
 from clothes and cars that they can afford. In my opinion,
only people
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the only people
 who have true feelings to each other could, ultimately, form a strong family and build
close relationship
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close relationships
a close relationship
.

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