In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Over the years, with the advancement of agricultural technology, a huge amount of
food
has been wasted,
instead
of being consumed in
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developing
developed
countries. Ironically, in some developing countries, people are dying of hunger or suffering from chronic malnutrition. From my perspective, the main reason behind the issue is
poverty
, and the issue could be addressed by humanitarian aid. The issue of starvation stems from destitution without a shadow of a doubt.
In other words
, the less access to wealth, the higher the possibilities people encounter
food
shortage. Numerous reasons that bring about the problem ranging from political instability to
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a geographical location
geographical locations
geographical location
in Ethiopia. Take Yemen as an example, people are in hunger pangs and live below the
poverty
line because the country is usually in war, and
thus
a huge amount of money needs to invest in wars
instead
of directing to livelihood economy. Another example is
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Ethiopia, where
Ethiopia where
the country is often regarded as emblematic of
poverty
. Droughts and
water
crisis have contributed to the nation’s poor economic status.
Therefore
, it is unlikely for
poverty
-stricken countries
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develop
to develop
skills or build infrastructure associating with agriculture. The optimal solution to fight famine would be humanitarian aid, and several approaches can achieve
this
goal.
First
,
food
assistance, including emergency feeding, necessities, and agricultural machines or
food
can be delivered to the abject
poverty
countries via donation.
Moreover
, diagnosis and treatment of malnutrition through fundraising, the funds should be directed towards local
food
-producing industries and hospitals or clinics in developing and distributing more nutritious
food
products to the poor.
Besides
, as for some remote area
water
may not be readily available, and
thus
water
shortage is the biggest concern for them. To cope with the predicament, enlisting experts in related fields is essential for improving
water
, hygiene, and sanitation to prevent
water
-related diseases. In
this
regard, clean
water
can be provided for drinking and irrigation in the needy regions. In conclusion, most people nowadays are agreed on the term “global village”, but we still witness a multitude of people succumbing to malnutrition or dying of hunger. Being part of global villagers, we should exert humanitarian activities
such
as donations or fundraising in the dire
poverty
regions.

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