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In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents, but in other cases people choose their own marriage partner. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is certainly a convoluted debate, whether or not one can figure out about a person’s culture and
character
 by the choice of his/her clothes. My school of thoughts differs from the subject matter, and I would be providing justifications to support my conceptualization.
First
 of all, it was a thing of the past that people adhered to cultural values in terms of clothing and food. Today, globalization has taken over and everyone has, voluntarily or involuntarily, taken part in
this
 rat race. Now, the urban way of living has forced the 9 to 5 workforce to follow the same routine and monotony in every aspect of their lives.
Furthermore
, clothes can be deceiving and can portray a false picture of the person trying to figure out the
character
 of the wearer. In
this
 contemporary era, people tend to follow global fashion and buy ready-made clothes, which makes them look alike and difficult to differentiate amongst. Broaching the alternate view, some specific wardrobes of some communities make it apparent to judge their culture, but most of attires worn by people around the world hardly give away anything about the culture. As far as
character
 is concerned, it is a very fragile topic and clothes alone cannot be held accountable to determine it. To reiterate, to a very small extent we can have the slightest viewpoint about the
character
 and the roots of a person based on the preference of his/her clothes. I believe the future won’t be any help either in
this
 matter as people are becoming more and more indistinguishable.
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