Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, the natural disaster is a common event that
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happens
happen
every
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year
years
in various areas. Even so, there are a different between rich and poor nations about the damage control and damage absorbing capability. It
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can agree
can be agreed
can be agree
that the resourceful states are better at dealing with the natural hazard and they should provide a support to the incapable. Exploring the benefits and loss from assisting
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this event
these events
these event
will prove
this
.
First
of all, if the rich countries help these poverty states, they could have expanded their political influence.
For example
, the American
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economy
economic
that infamous about being heavily relied on global influence needs many supports in international and
trade
pacts for their nation to continue flourishing.
Nevertheless
, the disaster
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assists
assist
in poorer states require these rich nations to spend a considerable amount of money in various
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forms
form
,
such
a low interest loan or an exclusive low tax exempt
trade
deal. Despite the American monetary loss, it could gain the return in
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the form
form
of a full cooperation from that country, many long term
trade
pacts, a better global image, and a higher status in hegemony circle. By
this
I
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mean
means
, the poverty countries will be in debt and have to return the
promote over another
favour
favor
in various forms.
Furthermore
, it is better for the strong countries to solve the Earth calamity before it spreading to global level.
For instance
, disease like COV19, which keep spreading to many countries, affect the
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economy
economic
and people life in international level, as a consequence, the world is going to experience a significant economic recession.
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The
the
wealthy
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countries, therefore
countries
therefore
were inevitable to include in
this
post-calamity affect.
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On
on
the contrary, if these
having great power or force or potency or effect
powerful
powerfull
nations do assist these
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countries'
country's
countries
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problems
problem
from the
the event consisting of the start of something
beginning
begining
with their professional staffs and high technology support, it might change the spreading flow or absorb the disease's damage in the area before it develop to the global economic recession and
finally
affect to them.
Hence
, the effort might risk their staffs' life and could experience a backlash if the mission was fail. Even so, if these strong states would
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take
taken
a lead, they might have
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left
leave
a good impression afterward, which could improve to an economic alliance or a new
trade
pact and
also
benefit from using these nations as an offshore defence line. In conclusion, it is better for everyone if the calamity were
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stopped
stop
with some benefit to both rich and poor
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
contries
in the post-disaster. I
also
believe that the strong countries are better at dealing with the natural disaster and they should provide a support to the weak. If every country could follow
this
idea, the world will has less problem.

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