Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, the natural disaster is a common event that
happen
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happens
every
years
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year
in various areas. Even so, there are a different between rich and poor nations about the damage control and damage absorbing capability. It
can be agree
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can agree
can be agreed
that the resourceful states are better at dealing with the natural hazard and they should provide a support to the incapable. Exploring the benefits and loss from assisting
these event
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this event
these events
will prove
this
.
First
of all, if the rich countries help these poverty states, they could have expanded their political influence.
For example
, the American
economic
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economy
that infamous about being heavily relied on global influence needs many supports in international and
trade
pacts for their nation to continue flourishing.
Nevertheless
, the disaster
assist
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assists
in poorer states require these rich nations to spend a considerable amount of money in various
form
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forms
,
such
a low interest loan or an exclusive low tax exempt
trade
deal. Despite the American monetary loss, it could gain the return in
form
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the form
of a full cooperation from that country, many long term
trade
pacts, a better global image, and a higher status in hegemony circle. By
this
I
means
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mean
, the poverty countries will be in debt and have to return the
favor
promote over another
favour
in various forms.
Furthermore
, it is better for the strong countries to solve the Earth calamity before it spreading to global level.
For instance
, disease like COV19, which keep spreading to many countries, affect the
economic
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economy
and people life in international level, as a consequence, the world is going to experience a significant economic recession.
the
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The
wealthy
countries
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countries, therefore
therefore
were inevitable to include in
this
post-calamity affect.
on
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On
the contrary, if these
powerfull
having great power or force or potency or effect
powerful
nations do assist these
countries
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countries'
country's
problem
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problems
from the
begining
the event consisting of the start of something
beginning
with their professional staffs and high technology support, it might change the spreading flow or absorb the disease's damage in the area before it develop to the global economic recession and
finally
affect to them.
Hence
, the effort might risk their staffs' life and could experience a backlash if the mission was fail. Even so, if these strong states would
taken
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take
a lead, they might have
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left
a good impression afterward, which could improve to an economic alliance or a new
trade
pact and
also
benefit from using these nations as an offshore defence line. In conclusion, it is better for everyone if the calamity were
stop
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stopped
with some benefit to both rich and poor
contries
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
in the post-disaster. I
also
believe that the strong countries are better at dealing with the natural disaster and they should provide a support to the weak. If every country could follow
this
idea, the world will has less problem.
Submitted by imperialmarch1 on

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