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he chart below shows the changes in gross domestic product(GDP) in the Western Cape between 2000 and 2010.

he chart below shows the changes in gross domestic product(GDP) in the Western Cape between 2000 and 2010.
The line chart illustrates the trends in the gross domestic product(
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) in the Western Cape
during
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 2000 and 2010.
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, the
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 growth increased between 2000 and 2007 until reaching the lowest growth in 2009. Looking at the period from 2000 to 2002, the
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 had small changes of about 0.5% and values ranging from 3.5% to 4%.
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 the year 2003 suffered from a drop of 1%in the
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 before going up in the following year.
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, a rise in the
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 can be observed in 2004.
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, the
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 was almost constant between 2004 and 2007. The highest
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 was 6% in 2007.
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 was followed by a 2% decline in the
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 in 2008 before reaching the lowest
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 of -1.5% in 2009. But the
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 started to recover in the period between 2009 and 2010.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words gdp with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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