The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since it construction in 1950.

The maps illustrate how West Park Secondary
School
has gone through some major changes in over
three
various time periods (1950, 1980 and 2010). Overall, it is clear that the main road remained in place over the time.
Besides
, over a fifty-year period from 1950 to 2010,
school
is extended while the house area is demolished in the
school
's layout
diagram
. In 1950, There were
three
houses rows nearby
school
;
however
, it is replaced by other buildings is that Science block and Car park in 1980.
In addition
, farmland is
also
replaced sports field in 1980.
Furthermore
, these buildings are constructed with the purpose of accommodating the increase in student enrolments. From 1980 to 2020, the
school
's layout
diagram
change in
size
of some areas. There was a dramatic increase in the
size
of the car park, compared to map in 1980. When deciding to extend
s
chool car par area,
Suggestion
the school car par area
certainly
school
facilities had to sacrificed. Obviously, in the
school
's layout
diagram
, ports field has lost
three
quarters its
size
, and the playground
also
is downsized by one
three
its
size
, compared the
school
diagram
in 1980.

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