the chart below gives information about the number of social netwroking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015
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bar chart shows the number of social networking sites
visited by internet users Canada
in 2014 and Change preposition
in Canada
in
2015.
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, we can see from the data that, in general, there were
a growing Correct subject-verb agreement
was
thendency
to use more Correct your spelling
tendency
then
one site.
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Although
just over one fifth
of internet user was not using any social networking Add a hyphen
one-fifth
sites
in either of the years, the proportion
in this
category decreased from 22 ratio
in 2014 to 21 Change to a plural noun
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proportion
in 2015. In both years the highest proportion
of users in any group fell into the 'one site' Category. However
, this
group declined sharply from 36 chunk
in 2014 to 28 interest in 2015.
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contrast, the number who reported using two Correct your spelling
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sites
, three sites
, four sites
and five sites
all grew over the period analysed In both years the proportion
of internet users fell as the number of social networking sites
increased, with only 2 percent
using the five Change the spelling
per cent
sites
in 2014 compared to 4 percent
in 2015.Change the spelling
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