Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Current emerging community and climate challenges around the world clearly state that countries throughout the globe are going to face huge difficulties in coming decades.

Moreover

, it will create major indirect effects in education

also

This

essay will describe that kind of abnormality we are going to witness in upcoming years and its prevention process with appropriate support.

Firstly

, we are not at all conscious about environmental balance which helps to keep entire world as a stable condition. Due to various environmental changes, we are experiencing numerous ups and downs in our daily life. If all of these are going to continue

then

we are going to meet shortage of drinking water and grain, less rainfall etc. For an example, Corona virus is gradually creating it's strength over human being. Some of the parts of our country have reported the same.

Secondly

, all these developing a silent but big changes in the education sector. As per medical science, these differences are responsible for the indifferent brain development of a child.

Therefore

, it is creating impact on the education of students.

Thirdly

, population control has become vital problems in our country. Resulting most of the people are jobless. As per my opinion, government must create laws or scheme to control populace which will ensure a smooth distribution of job among all. In other hand, we have to take care of our environment along with the urbanization. So that in the upcoming years we can have fresh air, organic food for us as well as our

generation. In conclusion, looking after our surroundings and society is our own task to keep our world green forever.

Tue Mar 10 2020

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

274 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Sustainability
Ecosystem
Renewable resources
Urbanization
Demographics
Healthcare system
Pension crisis
Curriculum development
Digital literacy
E-learning platforms
Lifelong learning
Public policy
Biodiversity conservation
Green technology
Population density
Generational equity
Economic disparity

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