The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000, there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on the British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.

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There is no doubt that by the year 2000 there will be as many vehicles on the roads of the United Kingdom. Whereas many people prefer to
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their own vehicles for safety and convenience purposes and others differ in the opinion that public transportation should be encouraged.
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, I believe that opting for public
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is more simple and the safest way of travelling. On the one hand, people should
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makes them more socialize and keep them away from loneliness. If you
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public
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to travel to your work it will keep you more punctual at work.
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is because, most of the metro rails, buses and other means of government
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run on a timely basis.
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you might face an accident or traffic congestions on the road if you
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your own vehicles, but if you
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any of public
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you can avoid these delays and you can be on
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and money simultaneously.
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, if you avoid using your cars and bikes on the roads
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will result in less air population of the country and its citizens.
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can be more cost-saving on fuel and
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less fuel consumption burden on the government.
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, you can buy a monthly or yearly pass in public
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for your travelling which can be far cheaper than comparing to your daily expenses of gasoline and oils.
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, you will feel less stressed and can utilize the
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of travelling
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as, reading newspapers, magazines or using social media on your mobile while doing some good walk. As a consequence, you will end up with a healthy lifestyle. In conclusion,
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cars are good for an emergency situation, but it can make you too lazy.
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, In my opinion, public
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is much simpler and better in many ways as it is less
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consuming and cheaper than compare to your own vehicles.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reliance on
  • regulate
  • traffic congestion
  • pollution
  • public health
  • sustainable development
  • alternative forms of transport
  • car ownership
  • balancing benefits and drawbacks
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