The internet will never replace traditional course books in schools. How far do you agree with this prediction?!

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Nowadasy the
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Nowadays, the
Nowadays the
internet will not
exechange
chemical process in which one atom or ion or group changes places with another
exchange
traditional course subjects at school.
well i
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well I
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am agree
Suggestion
agree with this point
agree this point
this
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point of view because social
netwoking
an interconnected system of things or people
networking
is more increase all the world.
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on
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On
the other hand internet
technalogy
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
has been very fast.
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morover I
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moreover i
strongly
beleive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
social network
make
Suggestion
makes
good
communcation
the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communication
communications
each peoples.
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secondly internet acsess
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The secondly internet access
secondly internet access
Secondly internet access
Secondly internet acsess
provide
Suggestion
provides
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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