Write a letter to your friend you borrowed something and get damaged. 1) Remind your friend you borrowed something from him 2) How it got damaged 3) How you are going to fix this issue?

Dear Emily,

Sorry

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it’s taken me so long to write to you, but at

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last

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I put pen to paper to explain why I haven’t returned that Basics of Hadoop Technology

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I borrowed from you. I hope you remember that I borrowed

this

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book

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from you 3 months ago when we completed our course on Hadoop technology at Nishtha institute. It’s a hard yellow cover

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published by Sam publications and written by Edward Derrick.

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, it was gifted by your brother for the successful completion of the course. What happened is that I had been reading up on the chapter about inserting

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apply

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data in the database when I knocked over my cup of coffee which splashed all over the

book

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. Most of the stain is on the pages that were open at that time. I’ve sent the

book

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away to be repaired. I didn’t realize that was even possible until I researched it. Anyway, it should be as good as new when I get it back

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week and

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I’ll send it on to you. Again, I’m so sorry for the delay in telling you. I hope you can forgive me. Best wishes Saru

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Mar 10, 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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198 words

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Write a letter to your friend you borrowed something and get damaged. 1) Remind your friend you borrowed something from him 2) How it got damaged 3) How you are going to fix this issue?

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