Write a letter to your friend you borrowed something and get damaged. 1) Remind your friend you borrowed something from him 2) How it got damaged 3) How you are going to fix this issue?

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Dear Emily,

Sorry

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it’s taken me so long to write to you, but at

last

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I put pen to paper to explain why I haven’t returned that Basics of Hadoop Technology

book

I borrowed from you. I hope you remember that I borrowed

this

book

from you 3 months ago when we completed our course on Hadoop technology at Nishtha institute. It’s a hard yellow cover

book

published by Sam publications and written by Edward Derrick.

Moreover

, it was gifted by your brother for the successful completion of the course. What happened is that I had been reading up on the chapter about inserting

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data in the database when I knocked over my cup of coffee which splashed all over the

book

. Most of the stain is on the pages that were open at that time. I’ve sent the

book

away to be repaired. I didn’t realize that was even possible until I researched it. Anyway, it should be as good as new when I get it back

week and

then

I’ll send it on to you. Again, I’m so sorry for the delay in telling you. I hope you can forgive me. Best wishes Saru

Submitted by sarulatha1.g on Tue Mar 10 2020

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Clear and correct grammar

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Write a letter to your friend you borrowed something and get damaged. 1) Remind your friend you borrowed something from him 2) How it got damaged 3) How you are going to fix this issue?

some people rely too much on doctors instead of taking care of their own health. they think all health problems can just be fixed by visiting doctors. what problems could this approach to healthcare cause and how might they be solved?

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Some people think that the media (newspapers) have the right to publish details of people,s private life while others think it should be controlled. Discuss both views.