Some people say that living in high-rise apartments feels very lonely and makes people unhappy. Others say there are advantages to living in an independent house. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

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Different people have different experiences and opinion and mould themselves according to it. Talking about opinions, I personally on my ground level resonate and agree with the majority of people thinking that living in high

rise

apartments, feels quiet, lonely and unhappy

moreover

that living in an independent house has its own advantages, benefits and luxury. Society consists of different people, Theses People make choices and decisions that speak out loud about their mental health and psychology. People living in high

rise

apartments are proven to have or

also

acquired by time so called antisocial personality trait. They like to interact less with people. Life in these apartments can

also

be referred to as silent life. As

this

world is moving at

such

a fast pace that people already have got no time to socialize. Human being is a social animal and when it is deprived of its needs, things tend to get worse for him. People living years in apartments have self claimed that how dull and boring their life becomes. They may live far from things

such

as pollution, dirt and noise, but they

also

get deprived of the natural necessities of life. They are not exposed to fresh air, new people, different kind of activities which

also

include sports like running, walking. Their role in social community is

also

less contributed and participated. These are the people who get lazy by time because people usually living in high

rise

apartments belongs to good socioeconomic status. They are more prone to have an unhealthy lifestyle, style or eating habits. All of

this in

Accept comma addition

this, in

turn, turn themselves into unhappy or lonely. Their body slowly starts getting suffocated and the suffocation reaches of their mind.

On the contrary

, living in a house as compared to high

rise

apartments are healthy mentally, physically and emotionally. Consider everything reverse in

this

case. They are a major part of the society wellbeing and basically represent society they have a healthy lifestyle that includes a morning walk with friends from the neighbourhood and a routine

that is

considered ideal. They are more exposed and close to nature from which drives their positive mindset. They are the ones who can't afford to live in suffocation or isolation. In conclusion, I support the idea of living in house independently or with family doesn't matter.

Fri Mar 13 2020

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

388 words

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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