Success is often measured by wealth and material possessions. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? what makes a successful person?

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A successful person is measured by a parameter called wealth,
in other words
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money or materials. Is it a right way to measure a success by wealth?
or
introduces an alternative
Or
it was insisted by wealthy people?
To begin
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with, people who are successful in increasing their monetary value are majorly considered as
achievement
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an achievement
.
For instance
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,
scientist
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a scientist
scientists
brought us so many inventions, which we
are using
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use
in our daily routine, but they were considered as against religious belief or they were not recognised. Major scientist lived their life in a very simple way, but achieved a lot, still not accepted as a successful personality.
Firstly
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, it is a human nature, everyone run behind the money and someone achieved to get
more wealthy
Suggestion
wealthier
and live a royal life, he will be taken as a role model.
Secondly
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,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Affluence
  • Materialism
  • Fulfillment
  • Well-being
  • Philanthropy
  • Societal norms
  • Personal growth
  • Economic power
  • Subjective
  • Humanitarian
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