Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?
It is an undeniable fact that crime is one of the major issues being faced by the world these days. It is seen that a large number of criminals continue committing crimes, soon after they are released from the jail, once their punishment period ends. There are a few reasons behind
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, it is the thought process of the criminals that urges them to continue spreading terror and disharmony in the society. Linking Words
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, multiple studies have been conducted on the serial killers, showing that their psychology and the feeling of happiness that they gain after killing someone, forces them to continue Linking Words
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, unemployment and poverty faced by the people, especially those living in the underdeveloped countries, adds an important contribution to the rising crime rate. Linking Words
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, in countries like Pakistan and Brazil, when prisoners are set free from the lock ups and they try to change themselves by earning the money through the proper means, the lack of jobs that they face pulls them back to the crimes like robbery, thievery and pick pocketing, in order to fulfil the needs of themselves and their families. But, if the governments of these countries offer more job opportunities, especially for the people who are neither well educated nor possess extraordinary skills, Linking Words
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To conclude, if the prisoners are provided with adequate psychological treatment during their sentence period, their pursuance to commit crimes could be decreased. Linking Words
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, if the state takes measures to provide the working places, particularly by promoting small businesses, the people would not need to turn themselves into criminals, in order to earn their livelihood.Linking Words
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