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Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. to what extent do you agree or disagree

#communication
This
 issue of how to share your thoughts and emotions with other people by having a conversation or communicate through emails or letters has come much more discussed topic these days;
however
 a agree with those who say that verbal part is the most important.In the following paragraphs I will explore the rationale for the both beliefs as well as proffer justification for my own viewpoint. Regarding those who hold that writing is the key between person communication, there are many reasons why not. One supportive claim that writing takes more time and effort to explain your thoughts and ideas,
moreover
 it requires particular skills to write in an excellent manner, which is very difficult especially these days. More specifically, if you write a letter you need to
use
 a high level vocabulary and you have to
use
 it correctly, and after all you need to check everything for mistakes, so it is a very labour-intensive process.
Nevertheless
, I firmly believe that it is less challenging for the person to describe everything in words.The obvious reason is that when you speak, you
use
 all parts of your body, all emotions and it is easy for the person to understand you. My close friend is a shining example of spoken communication he works as a sales manager so it is his job to persuade people to buy something, not only his ability to
use
 his body in conversations with clients helps him to perform better, but
also
 his unbelievable emotions sense of humour. In sum, I maintain that verbal ability is and will be the most important thing in a road of communication between each other. In the future, I sincerely wish that people will continue to talk.

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