every year several languages die out. some people think that this is not important because life would be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is considered
that is
not important enough to live with so many languages on the earth, even if your mother
laguage
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
luggage
is going to lose day bay day. I completely disagree with that opinion and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
think that it is more important to live a life with our own languages characteristic.
first
preceding all others in time or space or degree
First
of all I believe that life with many
laguage supports
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languages, supports
languages supports
language supports
diversity and cultures in
this
world to make everyone feel worthy everywhere they are. Even if everyone tries to make the live be easier by finding the similarity, but going to forget their own languages and identity, they will not proud of their heart at all.
it
Suggestion
It
always brings pressure in the whole life because missing something which they had before.
for
Suggestion
For
example, many people even if they speak with the English they still use their own accent, and some people proud of it. They will not forget their own
laguage
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
with that way. That is why it is important to keep our
laguage
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
luggage
up to keep our culture and make us feel proud with what we are, that using just one
laguage
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
.
secondly using
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Secondly, using
Secondly using
the variety of languages teaches us to try to understand people more, which can bonding our emotional each other.
in
Suggestion
In
the other words, there is a strong relation between variables of language and relationship with people around us. People who activity in the area with not just one
laguage
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
usage can easily has much more insight to their colleagues, because of that they are going to be easier to cooperate and collaborate with each other.
for
Suggestion
For
instance, Tony is the chief of the scholarship award, which consists of the award from many regions of Indonesia. He understands them with their accents and languages when makes an interaction to hand on the information from scholarship giver. In the end he becomes a good leader, succeeding to make a tight bonding, and everybody likes him so much.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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