every year several languages die out. some people think that this is not important because life would be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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It is considered

that is

not important enough to live with so many languages on the earth, even if your mother

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a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols

language

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is going to lose day bay day. I completely disagree with that opinion and

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think that it is more important to live a life with our own languages characteristic.

first

preceding all others in time or space or degree

First

of all I believe that life with many

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languages, supports

languages supports

language supports

diversity and cultures in

this

world to make everyone feel worthy everywhere they are. Even if everyone tries to make the live be easier by finding the similarity, but going to forget their own languages and identity, they will not proud of their heart at all.

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always brings pressure in the whole life because missing something which they had before.

for

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For

example, many people even if they speak with the English they still use their own accent, and some people proud of it. They will not forget their own

laguage

a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols

language

with that way. That is why it is important to keep our

laguage

a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols

language

luggage

up to keep our culture and make us feel proud with what we are, that using just one

laguage

a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols

language

secondly using

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Secondly, using

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the variety of languages teaches us to try to understand people more, which can bonding our emotional each other.

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the other words, there is a strong relation between variables of language and relationship with people around us. People who activity in the area with not just one

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a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols

language

usage can easily has much more insight to their colleagues, because of that they are going to be easier to cooperate and collaborate with each other.

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For

instance, Tony is the chief of the scholarship award, which consists of the award from many regions of Indonesia. He understands them with their accents and languages when makes an interaction to hand on the information from scholarship giver. In the end he becomes a good leader, succeeding to make a tight bonding, and everybody likes him so much.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Linguistic diversity
Cultural heritage
Language extinction
Communication barrier
Linguistic imperialism
Endangered languages
Language revitalization
Monolingual
Multilingual
Language preservation
Homogenization
Language policy
Cultural assimilation
Intangible heritage
Indigenous languages
Globalization
Dialects
Localization
Language documentation
Digital archiving

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every year several languages die out. some people think that this is not important because life would be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Include an introduction and conclusion

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages.

Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities

Compared to the past, more people are now studying abroad because it is more convenient and cheaper than before. Do you think this is beneficial to the foreign student's home country? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

The increase in production and consumption of meat has resulted in the destruction of the natural environment. What is the cause?What can be done to solve the problem?

Some governments provide financial assistance for retired, unemployed and disabled citizens. In other countries, families provide support for these people. Discuss both systems and give your opinion about which one you think is better.