televison and internet have brought revolution in the field of communication and entertainment, but their excessive use has negative impact too. discuss both the views.

televison
Suggestion
Television
Televison
and
internet
technology is
backbon
Suggestion
the backbone
backbone
backbones
of todays
life
we can not
imagin
form a mental image of something that is not present or that is not the case
imagine
life
whithaout
in absence of
without
it, but
ther
in or at that place
there
is
Suggestion
are
soom
quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity
some
soon
shame
disadwantege
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantages
disadvantage
too.
televison
Suggestion
Television
Televison
and
enterteimant
an activity that is diverting and that holds the attention
entertainment
is
nesesity
Suggestion
a necessity
necessity
the necessity
of our todays
life
becose
for the reason that; on account of
because
everyone has
ther
in or at that place
there
their
on
work
and busy
in
Suggestion
with
that so after that they wants to
relexe
become less tense, rest, or take one's ease
relax
in that
time
televison
broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects
television
and
internet
Suggestion
the internet
make
tham
objective case of they
them
then
enjoy.
Howeaver
Suggestion
However
,
ther
in or at that place
there
their
is
Suggestion
are
los
a large number or amount
lots
of side
efact
property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business
effects
too due to more
use
of
televison
broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects
television
televisions
and
internet
we
can not
can not
cannot
manage our
time
and we
can not
can not
cannot
finish our
work
on
time
.
but
Suggestion
But
internet
use
is todays
nessecity
the condition of being essential or indispensable
necessity
becoss
for the reason that; on account of
because
internet
Suggestion
the internet
can help in communication for
internetionol
Suggestion
international
business
internet
use
Suggestion
user
is must,
firstly
internet
can make faster
our
plural of "I"
we
wore and less
requrment
required activity
requirement
requirements
of employers so we can
do
engage in
make
profite
Suggestion
a profit
profit
in less
invesment
the act of investing; laying out money or capital in an enterprise with the expectation of profit
investment
. In 90
parcenteg
a proportion in relation to a whole (which is usually the amount per hundred)
percentage
of business is only depends on
internet
Suggestion
the internet
and in
aducation
the activities of educating or instructing; activities that impart knowledge or skill
education
sectore
a plane figure bounded by two radii and the included arc of a circle
sector
studen
a learner who is enrolled in an educational institution
student
take more help
frome
a giver or sender
from
internet
while online
lurning
the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge
learning
corse
education imparted in a series of lessons or meetings
course
courses
.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
we can not
imagin
form a mental image of something that is not present or that is not the case
imagine
life
whithout
in absence of
without
iternet
a computer network consisting of a worldwide network of computer networks that use the TCP/IP network protocols to facilitate data transmission and exchange
internet
.
and
Suggestion
And
televison
broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects
television
.
it
Suggestion
It
is
also
our
moode
a characteristic (habitual or relatively temporary) state of feeling
mood
model
buster.
moreever
in addition
Moreover
moreover
excessive
Suggestion
the excessive use
use
of
televison
broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects
television
televisions
and
internet
is very
disater
a state of extreme (usually irremediable) ruin and misfortune
disaster
for students
careare
Suggestion
care are
and they can not
achive
to gain with effort
achieve
tham
of them or themselves
their
them
goal,
secondly
more
use
of
televison
broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects
television
is can don
destrect
draw someone's attention away from something
distract
distracts
distrust
us and bad
efect
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
effects
on
ower
of or belonging to us
our
work
.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
afcourse
the concentration of attention or energy on something
focus
it has negative impact too, we should manage our
time
and we have to
knolege
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
that how much
use
of it
requre
require as useful, just, or proper
requires
for our
work
.
then
Suggestion
Then
after we can
bee
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
be
safe of its negative impact. In my point of
wue
an overwhelming feeling of wonder or admiration
awe
we can no
stope
Suggestion
stop e
use
of
televison
broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects
television
televisions
and
internet but
Accept comma addition
internet, but
we can do balance
betwen
internal to, involving members of (a group of people)
between
nesesury
absolutely essential
necessary
unnecessary
and bad
use
, so
evrything thing
Suggestion
the everything thing
everything thing
is only opon
Suggestion
has only opened
is only open
only opens
is only upon
our
undersanding
the cognitive condition of someone who understands
understanding
,
lastly
we have to
khow
be cognizant or aware of a fact or a specific piece of information; possess knowledge or information about
know
wery
used as an intensifier
very
well
hou
in what way or manner or by what means
how
much and
hou
in what way or manner or by what means
how
who
to
use
is.

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