Nowadays many people eat very badly in spite of the information, which is available about ways to have a health, balanced diet. What could be the possible causes of this? Suggest some solutions which may improve the eating habits of the young.

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Eating habits are changing at an alarming rate and unfortunately those ways are being adopted which are not good. There is not a single cause

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responsible for all

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, because there are numerous factors responsible for

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. The Government is trying to curb

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issue. In my opinion, there is need of collaborative efforts.

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and foremost, the cause of eating badly is the hectic schedule of life. In running time everybody is running to make the both ends meet and there is no time to cook healthy food, more significantly no time to eat calmly. All

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affecting the eating habits negatively. Moving

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, easy availability of fast foods has impacted eating habits badly.

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, there is accessibility to eat from outside at a door step and in

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type of situation who will bother to cook at home, even though outside food is unhealthy.

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, every obstacle has a solution and

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issue can

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be sorted. The best solution is the self-motivation. There is a need that people should realize the value of healthy eating, if they do so

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the trouble will be resolved. But for

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, the government should run more campaigns, not only with the benefits of healthy eating but

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with effects of unhealthy eating. To conclude, in my viewpoint,

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problem is a matter of concern, as it is seen with more craze in new generation which will affect society more negatively. But, if individual and the government both takes action to curb

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affair, it can be eliminated before it gets deep rooted

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

Many people think that money is important to achieve happiness. What is the importance of money to happiness? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience.

Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with.

Some people think that a person should change a career at least once, while others think that it is better to stay in one job for a lifetime. What is your opinion?