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The graph below shows the sales of children’s books, adult fiction and education books between 2002 and 2006. Summarize the info by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the sales of children’s books, adult fiction and education books between 2002 and 2006. Summarize the info by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the annual
sales
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 between 2002 and 2006 of
children’s
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books
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,
adult
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fiction
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, and education
books
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. The
sales
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 figures are depicted in the form of millions of
dollars
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.
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, in 2002,
adult
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fiction
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 was the
best selling
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 followed by
children’s
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books
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 and educational
books
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. These positions had reversed by the year 2006, wherein,
children’s
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books
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 were the most
in demand
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 followed by educational and
adult
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fiction
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books
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.
Firstly
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, the
sales
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 of
the
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apply
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children’s
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books
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 have gone up every year, especially between 2002-03,
where
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when
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it
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they
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 skyrocketed to become the number 1 selling among the 3
books
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. It
initially
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 generated a revenue of around 33 million
dollars
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 in 2002, which skyrocketed to a staggering 58 million
dollars
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 in 2006.
Secondly
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, the selling of
adult
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fiction
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 and educational
books
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 fluctuated every year.
However
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, the
sales
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 trend of
adult
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fiction
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 usually declined
while
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 that of educational
books
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 increased. It was not until the start of 2006, when
the
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 educational
books
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 outsold
the
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adult
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fiction
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books
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, accounting for 33 and 30 million
dollars
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 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 82%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, children’s, books, adult, fiction, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "skyrocketed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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