Environmental issues have always been an international problem because governments are not imposing harsh punishments against offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.

Environmental degradation is a worldwide issue because the political party in power is not taking giving punishments to offenders.
This
essay strongly disagrees with the aforementioned statement.
This
essay will
first
, discuss that the government has imposed huge fines on various factories and industries so that they do not pollute the environment, and
further
, outline that several means of public transports is built to discourage people to use their personal vehicle which releases harmful gases in the air. It is clear that the ministry has imposed many stringent penalties and laws on factories so that they do not release harmful gases in the air.
This
is to say, the industries are aware that if they will throw harmful chemical waste in water and land,
then
they will have to pay penalties to the law, so they ensure to undertake steps that do not have any harmful effects on the environment.
As a result
, the amount of pollution in the surrounding is reduced,
thus
protecting the habitat. To elucidate, a recent study conducted by The Times showed more than 80 percent reduction in the amount of waste produces from manufacturing units because of huge fines imposed by the government. Apart from
this
, the political party in power launches various schemes and plans to discourage people from using their own cars and
instead
travel from public transportations and those who break these rules have to pay fines.
In other words
, people are motivated to travel from one place to another through metros and buses as
this
will not only reduce the amount of harmful combustible gas release from cars but will
also
reduce the traffic on roads. To elucidate, a recent study conducted by The Times of India showed that the odd-even,
that is
in odd days cars with odd number will be used and on even dates cars having even number plates will be on the road,
thus
decreasing the nature's pollution by 60 percent. To conclude, In my opinion, I vehemently agree, that environment is punishing harsh for people involves in environmental degradation by imposing huge fines on factories and motivates people to use public transport rather than personal cars.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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