Many people believe there should be a curfew law so that people under the age of 18 are not out past midnight. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

According to some individuals, enacting curfew act is imperative so that people under the age of

eighteen

are not out after

midnight

. In my opinion, I totally agree with the above assertion.

This

essay will discuss the rationale for my view. One of the reasons I am of the opinion that the curfew law should be enforced, so that people under

eighteen

do not go out past

midnight

is that it curtails them from visiting immoral places. The reason for

this

is that

Accept space

children below that age who believe that visiting places

such

as night clubs, bars and so on is to have fun, but if the law to abrogate them is put in place,

this

will prevent them from going to irresponsible events.

For instance

, while growing up, my siblings and I do not go to night parties, friends invited us because there was a rule in the residential area that children under

eighteen

should be at

home

before twelve am. Another reason for my view is that

such

policy should hold so that persons under

eighteen

years of age ought to be at

home

before

midnight

to eradicate young adult crime.

This

is because the rate at which young people under

eighteen

are introduced to illicit acts is alarming.

However

, if the constitution is enacted that they should be at their domicile before

midnight

this

will abrogate young persons crime.

For example

, a survey carried out by the police force in Nigeria show that young persons below

eighteen

crime has reduced significantly since the government has placed a law that they should be at

home

before the early hours of the morning. In conclusion, I believe it is essential to enforce a constitution to prevent people under

eighteen

to be at

home

before

midnight

to curtail them from visiting immoral.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

300 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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