You borrowed something from your friend; later, it got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: apology about the issue tell how it got damaged say you are going to fix this issue.

Dear Tasmina, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing

this

letter to apologize regarding the camera which I had borrowed from you

last

week. I feel dreadful after what happened. I know how much it means to you, and I am incredibly sorry about that. Let me explain how it happened. I had the camcorder with me all the time, as you said I did not give it to anyone. But it happens as

such

that I was taking a picture, and I got a pushed, which was unintentional by my uncle, and the camera fell off my hand, and so the lens got damaged. I know I should’ve been more careful, but it just occurred in a fraction of a

second

. After that, I took it right away to the company store, which was nearby. He examined the camera thoroughly and suggested that the lens cannot be repaired and had to get it replaced, so I placed an order for that, and it shall arrive in two to three days. Fortunately, all the memory is safe, and none of them got deleted. I do apologize, and I would let you know as soon as it gets repaired, and I would personally come to give it back to you. I hope you understand. Regards, Shakib

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You borrowed something from your friend; later, it got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: apology about the issue tell how it got damaged say you are going to fix this issue.

Friendships that take place online are not as meaningful as those where people meet each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people say now there is less communication between family members than in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, the government pays unemployed people on a weekly basis. How this would impact people as well as government? Do you agree or disagree with that?

Every year several languages die out. Some people think that is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?