Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
Since the very beginning, people
judge
each other by their Use synonyms
fashion
sense. Some may argue that it is inappropriate to Use synonyms
judge
someone by what they wear. I partially agree with Use synonyms
this
statement, which will be explained in the following paragraphs.
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To begin
with, Linking Words
fashion
has always defined our world. Use synonyms
One
can easily decide about a Use synonyms
person
’s native country or which religion he or she is practicing by the choice of their clothes. Indian women prefer different types of sari based on the state that they belong to is the classic example. A north Indian woman and a south Indian woman will have Use synonyms
difference
in the way that they drape their sari. Suggestion
a difference
differences
Similarly
, a modern day Indian woman will prefer modern Linking Words
attire
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attire, such
such
as casual jeans and trousers rather than traditional sari. Not only culture, but clothes Linking Words
also
define Linking Words
one
’s Use synonyms
character especially
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character, especially
of
a girl. In our society, a girl wearing short clothes is judged to be Suggestion
for
character less
and is always harassed especially by men.
lacking distinct or individual characteristics; dull and uninteresting
characterless
In addition
to Linking Words
this
, clothes have a major influence on a Linking Words
person
’s individual status in the society. Use synonyms
This
can be easily understood by the growing number of Linking Words
fashion
Use synonyms
influencers
in social media. a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influences
One
can easily Use synonyms
judge
Use synonyms
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
person
’s financial status by the kind of brands he or she can afford. A lady wearing Versace apparels, Jimmy Cho shoes and carrying Marie Claire purses will always be given more respect than a girl who is dressed in ordinary clothes. Nowadays, wearing branded clothes is a signal that Use synonyms
one
belongs to a high profile family, takes care of his or her looks and Use synonyms
thus
is a successful Linking Words
person
.
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On the contrary
, Linking Words
this
belief system has many negative points. Linking Words
One
can Use synonyms
judge
about Use synonyms
one
’s intellectual ability with mere clothes. The co-founder of Facebook, Mark Zuckerberg, is famous of wearing Use synonyms
grey t-shirt
and black sweat pants every single day and Bill Gates, founder of Microsoft, is never seen wearing any expensive branded clothes. Both of them are Suggestion
a grey shirt
grey shirt
classic example
of how clothes can never define what a Suggestion
classic examples
a classic example
person
actually is. A Use synonyms
person
can wear whatever he or she can afford or is comfortable with and still manage to be super successful or even have good morale, kind heart and helping nature.
In summary, Use synonyms
fashion
truly defines from where a Use synonyms
person
belongs to or his or her financial status. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
one
should not always try to fit people in pre-defined boxes. Use synonyms
One
should try to look beyond clothes and dressing sense to actually understand other persons’ ideas and values.Use synonyms
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