Although for most people it takes a long time to become successful, for some, it happens at a very young age. Are the disadvantages of being a young celebrity greater than the advantages.

The majority of people have to struggle for a long time to achieve great success in life, while others hit a home run in a matter of months or years when they are very young. As

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see it, being rich and famous is not worth losing one's childhood.

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essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of being a young celebrity and my opinion will be presented with supporting evidence. The most positive aspect of being a young celebrity is definitely the prompt success. Starting up at a young

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allows child stars to develop their career paths early on as when they grow up, they are likely to have accumulated a huge range of valuable experience from the premature working process that newbies of the same

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do not have.

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, those who have attained prestige at an early

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through entertainment industry have more opportunities to develop and uphold their long-term professions.

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, many film corporations are willing to pay high packages for experienced young actors or actresses to work

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, these early - aged celebrities are not only more financially stable

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able to build their prospective businesses.

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, being a young public figure would be extremely beneficial in terms of independence.

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is since they have always been taught how to behave before

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and make their own decisions. Research conducted at the Canadian ministry of education revealed that famous young people are more expected to be independent by 50%. Despite

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arguments, there are various reasons why it might be considered as adverse to become successful early.

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, the primary disadvantage of getting popular while young is the loss of

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childhood, which

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one of the most beautiful and memorable periods in each individual's life. These young talents have to spend far more time to work and practice constantly compared to other kids at the

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that they should have been free to play, study and cultivate themselves.

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, gaining superficial attention may have some appeal, the reality

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and certainly cannot be subjected to the tremendous public pressure and scrutiny.

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was widely criticized for her voice due to lack of practice are now having serious depression and anxiety disorders.

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, with a few years of life experience, children usually do not have enough social knowledge to cope with innumerable problems out of their related fields or protect themselves from detrimental factors of society

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as child exploitation. All in all,

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strongly believe that healthy childhood, along with at least some degree of anonymity, is imperative to a child's overall well-being.

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, the benefits of the early

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success are outweighed by the negative drawbacks of sacrificing youth and the loss of one's natural development.