28. Today, most people get married and give birth in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion? To what extent do you support this development?

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ages, which

ontribute to the fact that more females tend to marry and become mothers in their late thirties. As one of feminists, I definitely opine that women will benefit more if they start their families later.

However

, under certain situation, marrying and having babies in old ages

also

cause negative impacts to them.

To begin

with, it is easy for women to focus on their careers and establish their financial independence if they stay single until later in their thirties.

Firstly

, single women will be more flexible and competitive in the workforce. They are as competent as males in jo

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hildren that may be obstacles for women's careers because taking care of children and doing household cores all will distract their attention and energy from their jobs.

Besides

, researches show that women marrying and having a baby in their late 30s will provide better living environments for their springs as compared with those in their early 20s or even yo

ungers.

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Obviously, more women have rights to live in the lifestyle that they prefer.

This

is the result of human civilization and feminism.

However

, giving a birth in la

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pregnancy, which

ncreases the risk for mothers or babies to suffer from health conditions

such

as high blood pressure in pregnant women or Down syndrome in babies. The mortality rate of pregnant women is higher when they are over 35 years old.

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omen becoming a mother in their later 30s have mo

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a tougher time

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o adapt their new roles than those in their early 20s. In conclusion, due to feminism activities, nowadays, females will have equal opportunities in the workforce.

This

may contribute to the phenomenon that they tend to marry and give bi

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n their late 30s with the above reasons .

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However

, these women will

also

have some drawbacks for their health and their children's health as well.

Therefore

, females should choose a proper moment for themselves to start their families individually.