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Vaccinating children against preventable diseases is not only unnecessary but also dangerous.

#children #diseases
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Vaccination
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 is a form of a medical service wherein, an individual is injected with a mild form, mostly inactive, of a particular
disease
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 so that
host
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body
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 immunizes itself from that
disease
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 by generating antibodies to fight against it. Some would argue that vaccinating,
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 unnecessary, might even prove fatal for the younger section of society. I agree that
vaccination
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 programs are necessary, even in some cases might be dangerous. Their role in preventing unidentifiable
disease
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 and containing the outburst of epidemics outweighs its disadvantage of being dangerous. Vaccines are basically bacteria or virus cultures prepared in laboratories which are inactive or incapable of infecting the
host
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body
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.
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, in few people with a weak immunity, especially the young children, their bodies are unable to produce antibodies to restrict these foreign particles and
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 cause their bodies to be infected. Or in some cases the vaccine culture may not be completely inactive and may manifest in the
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body
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 upon entry and may prove dangerous. A recent report published by WHO, stated that around 8% of all children under the age group of 6 years have contracted some
disease
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 due to
vaccination
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.
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, many diseases,
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 as smallpox or polio, remain undetected in the
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body
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 until they show some visible symptoms by the time its incurable.
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 unidentifiable and easily transmittable diseases can infect a numerous other people and lead to epidemics.
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, in India small pox has been known to have killed millions of people in the past and currently India has completed eradicated it undertaking
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 drives. In conclusion,
vaccination
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 programs are necessary to help nations completely eradicate preventable diseases
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