1. In recent years, pressure on school and university students has been increasing and they are pushed to work very hard from a young age. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Students are the building blocks of a society. Recently, there has been a rise in pressure on school and university students and are forced to work really hard from childhood. According to me, it is a negative development as
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Students are generally in strain to win from everyone else from a very early life. Suggestion
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has created lots of unnecessary competition between the peers and everyone is trying to work harder. Linking Words
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causing negative effects upon the mental health of a kid. It involves working very hard. One is always worried about the future outcomes of the exams. But what if the result is not according to what one desired? Sometimes the answer to Linking Words
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comes as suicide. It becomes difficult for a student to handle these tensions and they feel the most easy way out is to die. According to a report, there has been an increase in the number of suicides per year by students.
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changing the behaviour of a person. Some kids may find it difficult in these situations to cruise smoothly. They may lose the right path and commit suicide.Linking Words
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