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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum limits on vehicles, others think there are other better ways. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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Traffic
 congestion is one of the major emerging problems these days, which is causing lots of fatalities in road accidents.So, some people hold the opinion that a number of vehicles can be controlled to prevent
such
 incidents.
However
, others believe that some other effective measures
such
 as awareness of
traffic
 safety, including speed limit and building wider roads cab be taken. I will discuss both views, I,
however
 side up with later view.
To begin
 with those who support the former view have thought that limiting the number of vehicles per family can reduce their total of roads and eventually roadway security can be enhanced.
Moreover
, there is no need to invest money on infrastructure
such
 as building wider roads and multilane highways for reducing transportation.
Therefore
,
such
 people consider it as the best and cost effective measure which can show immediate results.
However
, another go oppose because of many reasons,
firstly
 by reducing vehicle number we cannot totally control road mishap. Because,
traffic
 snarls are not the only cause of safety issues. It is due to the negligence of people and over speed of vehicles. Which is resulting from the breaching of
traffic
 rules and ignorance.So, awareness should be provided to people to follow
traffic
 rules and if they are found disobeying
then
 strict action should be taken.
Secondly
, to control
traffic
 congestion wider roads with multi lanes can be built and as an alternative metro ways or subways can be used. To conclude, no doubt roadway security can be improved be controlling automobiles on roads, but some other measures
such
 as public awareness and transportation infrastructure along with are more important to curb the menace.
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